Because I thought the narration didn't match up properly with the narration, I cut down some pauses, to get the tense music playing over a tense line.
The section highlighted in the second image, is a section of narration I'm considering cutting out. so the film finishes on the line "turned to science. which would hugely fit the last scene we have planned with the monster hovering over the character. And this will leave this film at a point of 'what does the monster do to the character' which might be a nice cliff hanger to leave the audience wondering.
In order to get a finished film for submission, I think it would be best to cut it down. we can always finish it with the full narration although, the music doesn't last as long as the narration, which doesn't sound great in silence at the end. we'd probably have to re use a section.
Callum said we could use a section from the music to add to the length of the music, however I really don't want to extend it anymore, due to the fact I don't want to submit a film which has storyboard sections in it, so would rather cut it down.
plus the end clips are not at a finished standard, I've tried to edit them to make them look realistic, but really we needed to film that scene in stop motion, zooming with the camera so you get the distance right, as here with a still image it just looks all wrong.
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