In todays' crit there were a few points that were pointed out for us to change. The sound was still a little too quiet, the voice over needs to be more louder than the music, so you can clearly hear the story.it would be better for there to be no narration over the credits, but after speaking to Callum, he said he didn't want the line "I hope for the best" to be in the film anyway, so this can be cut and the credits can stay in place without the narration.
there are a few scenes that just stop, for example the drip scene which I think needs either a zoomed close up following the drip as it falls, then this will continue the motion.
for the flashback it was said that the character should be animated a little too.
And I think that the titles I did need to be slightly smaller as they are quite overpowering on the big screen.
Finally foli sounds need to be added: walking, writing, monster sounds, lighting, chair. this would add more depth to the animation.
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